Monday, March 28, 2011
Thursday, March 10, 2011
Wednesday, March 9, 2011
A comment on "The Inverted Pyramid"
A bit of social observation and/or poetry should be strong enough to stand on it's own when you hear it, but I prefer to present it to a reader rather than a listener. In this way, I can influence them with how it looks, as well as how it sounds. The visual form also defines and enhances the rhythm that the writer sees for that piece. With this poem, the physical appearance emphasizes the inherent instability of an inverted pyramid in the social model.
comment on "time and distance"
Despite the apparent simplicity of this poem, it was a challenge. With the first verse in hand, and not a clue where it was going, the decision was made to keep the verses at three lines and the last word of each verse had to rhyme with the last word of the prior verse. Second, the poem had to reach a recognizable conclusion. And third, once a verse was left behind for the next verse, it could never be changed!
Time and Distance
. . . so I sez
now look here Blind Billy
and why don't you see
we only travel
through time
from sneaker to knee
we pay for the time
but the distance
is free
when the distance
is done
we enter our plea
to beg
a new chance
from the Last Referee
to repent
and reform
we promise with glee
but He knows
of our record
does the Last Referee
and He knows
of our need
to disagree
so He gives us new life
a new chance to do right
another yank at the cosmic goatee
A comment on "At Home With The Homeless"
This piece was written while I was (belatedly) going to college. The sub-title was added because some of my classmates thought that it may have been exaggerated a little. It wasn't. The people who lived there had nowhere else to go, except for the streets. I lived there because I got a break on the rent for cleaning up every morning and for policing the residents at night. My decision to leave was made one morning when I realized that confrontation and violence had become a way of life, i.e. I was at home with the homeless.
Tuesday, March 8, 2011
AT HOME WITH THE HOMELESS
(A Gentle View)
Welcome to the Orford Hotel. We know your biggest fear; that when you get evicted, you're gonna end up here.
Welcome to the Orford Hotel. The last stop for the helpless and homeless, the weak and the weary. Leave your dignity at the door, there's no need anymore.
Welcome to the Orford Hotel, where the hallways smell like bare feet and beer farts, strong enough to make an onion weep.
Welcome to the Orford Hotel, where the dead and the dying are buried without a prayer. Where pastime becomes passion and emotional brutality the fashion. Where residents are hesitant to care any more or drink any less.
Welcome to the Orford Hotel, where we stay in shape by running in place and running out of time. Where we amuse ourselves by abusing ourselves and living in our dreams. But the dreams are dying, and the nightmares are coming and common, and still we sleep.
Welcome to the Orford Hotel. . .
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